WE DO NOT NEED TO SEE SOMEONE’S DICK, MASTURBATION, OR SEXUAL FLUIDS ON THE FIRST PAGE TO READ YOUR STORY!
WHAT ARE WE DOING HERE? WHAT IS THE POINT? WHY AM I SEEING ALL THESE BODILY FLUIDS BEFORE I EVEN KNOW WHAT THE STORY IS ABOUT? WHO ASKED FOR ALL THIS? WHAT DOES IT ADD TO THE PLOT? ABSOLUTELY…
First of all, the artwork is absolutely gorgeous. The illustrations are stunning, and I have nothing negative to say about them. A solid 10/10 for the art! I already struggle to read black-and-white comics because of my eyesight, but I could still read this one comfortably. Honestly, the artwork…
I swear bro, You don’t need to show us bodily fluids, disgusting stuff coming out of people’s bodies, or characters masturbating, touching themselves, and penetrating each other right at the beginning of a chapter just to get us to read your story. We can read it perfectly well without any of that!…
Let’s start with the positives. The artwork is beautiful, so I’d give it an 8/10 for the drawings. I also genuinely like the concept; it had a lot of potential. As for the slow burn, I’d give it a 6/10, mainly because the intimate scenes aren’t supposed to be the main focus of the story.…
What😂 do you know that the story it’s about loving without being influenced by the naming thing. He want him to love him without being forced by the name thing. He showed him his intentions but he wanted to put him with someone else it’s just weird and rude.
You people seriously need to examine your obsession with incest. I’ve noticed how common it is in these stories, and honestly, it’s getting exhausting. Maybe it’s time to talk to someone.
But if you ask my opinion this absolutely not my thing. Zero interest. 😭
And please, you can write a…